The following poem was first published in the Summer 2024 edition of Altered Reality Magazine. It’s about a Venusian girl who longs to go to space and visit Earth. The poem follows her life as she struggles to complete this goal while the planet is plagued with the runaway greenhouse effect. Since Venus’s day is longer than its year, the girl’s age is measured in days. The poem takes place hundreds of millions, if not billions, of years ago.
1 Day Old
A baby loved and doted on
mountains rise above the water
Sunhawks chase while teavers yawn
as this blue babe begins to totter
But the air is growing hotter,
shifting clouds of orange and tan
The scarlet sky calls to this daughter
reaching up her hand
8 Days Old
The news across the aerovision:
“The Wights have flown their whirling disc!”
In the face of mocking derision
it rises above the stifling mist
But to her parents this girl insists,
“I will one day fly these skies.”
Such ideas have weight and risk
to such weathered eyes
13 Days Old
With her telescope she sees
a planet painted purple and red
The Pritchett enters space with ease
as dreams of orbits flood her head
But the planet’s blue instead,
covered with continents of green
This mismatch brings a sudden dread
to this starstruck teen
19 Days Old
She writes on a desk of marble
in the hall of cosmic school
Over diagrams of stars she marvels
this knowledge her ambition fuels
But she stays inside—it’s cool
for the rivers are nearly boiling
A passing pattern plain and cruel
cannot stop her toiling
26 Days Old
Now she sits upon the launchpad,
watching numbers counting down
The latest spacesuit snugly clad
and helmet fitted to her crown
But smiles turn to frantic frowns
as the mission is aborted
Clouds too thick and dingy brown
smear the skies distorted
37 Days Old
Her telescope no longer sees
the sun, the stars, her destination
The planet with the water, trees
and the hope of new creation
But she still believes her nation
can resurrect the disc anew
Counteract the fear, frustration
and reach the distant blue
54 Days Old
The days are truly, exceptionally hot
society long torn asunder
by the torment weather wrought
atmosphere thick with thunder
But she’ll finally fix their blunder
The stolen disc breaks through the veil
into space, and oh! What wonder!
Begin the long exhale
Planet three in view,
her flight is true
Everything she thought she knew
can’t compare to
that endless blue
She hurtles through
air fresh and new
and bids ado
to hellish hues
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