The following poem was first published in the Summer 2024 edition of Altered Reality Magazine. It’s about a man living on the planet Mercury, trying to survive the extreme temperature oscillations. During the day, the surface temperature can reach 790 °F, while at night the temperature plummets to −270 °F. Interestingly, because of Mercury’s highly eccentric orbit, a solar day (the time it takes the sun to return to the same place in the sky) is two Mercury years long.
The first planet from the sun, spinning splendid, not outdone
by its neighbors orbiting in the solar sea
With temperatures most extreme, oscillating as its theme
from the scorching heights supreme to a darkness still and icy
From this world I cannot flee
From this madness never free
With no atmosphere to speak of, mercury rising, creatures sneak off
hiding from the soaring sun, searing blasted scree
Stretched across this barren plain, regolith gray and granite veins
a desert land where gravel reigns, absent the Almighty
Forget me not, Lord, this I plea
Save me for eternity
Temperatures are climbing higher in this heart of frost and fire
where a day lasts two long years by some strange decree
Where the sun sets once then twice, I’m trapped within this heated vise
my constant pining for some ice, I pray thee foolishly
The heat is boiling, naturally
But worse than cold? I disagree
The last of sunlight’s rays are gone, a year of coldness soon will dawn
I build a shelter, bundle up, then begin the long withdraw
A place of blackness with no moon, the stars across the sky are strewn
while I am bound to this cocoon, in a cave that’s bleak and blah
My teeth chatter, tight-set jaw
Jack Frost to my ears will gnaw
This cold sets in; it won’t let go. Around the campfire’s measly glow
to stay alive I take my leave and march my numb feet raw
So I start to weave and wander, while my sanity I ponder
I think I’ll backtrack over yonder, then I freeze in awe—
The sunlight breaks! Aha! Aha!
And so the ice begins to thaw
I can’t do this? Who’m I kidding? The stoic sun glares down, forbidding
I cover my face, give cry and chase, and fall on bended knee
Sunlight so white and burning bright, I plead for night: it isn’t right!
Please hear my plight, you ghostly fright! I beg you: can’t you see me?
The curtain closes on year three
This cycle will not let me be
The cold has come again, I say! I cannot last another day!
Seesaw, seesaw, mercurial beebaw! Deedaw, meemaw, gleebaw, streedaw!
I’m descending into madness, filled with overwhelming sadness
surrounded by this pointless badness, circling round and round
I strive across this cursed ground
where every rock is dull or brown
for in this prison I was bound
when my spaceship hunkered down
and I very nearly drowned
as my head was justly crowned
with fateful memories I found
of the grating, hating sound
of a mind which knows no bounds
but circles round and round and round
Hot then cold then hot again,
then cold then hot then cold and then…
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